Those boring lines of mine
The ones that never got below anyone’s spine
Those idiotic sayings and thoughts
The Ones that discuss about do’s and do not’s
They don’t deserve to be called “masterpieces”
They never shatter hearts into pieces
They are treated as crap as they deserve
And thats why I’m frank, not reserved
Those clumsy love poems
Which sound more of ‘meant-for-girls Hymns’
Those irritating convey through letters
The ones that pretended to feel, never utters
Are in real, the real shit
I think I should never give them another hit
I’m sure I’m never gonna try that
I’ll surely sit and write but no write-ups like that
The true challenge is to not self criticize.
agreed .. but I write only when I actually feel like.. and if someone poses a challenge in front of me to write a poem criticizing your own work.. you have to.. caus you have to make them believe that you write those poems yourself.
Ah. I understand. I do enjoy a challenge. My words seem to be what I want or am not getting in my life.
I agree too, for me wordings are my ways to let it out what is inside of me…. I like this piece…
aww.. thanks a lot …. .
Awesome poem..
he he thanks.. but it depicts that I’m not a poet
hello! this is to show my great appreciation to u pls. check it out….. http://willofheart.wordpress.com/2011/11/19/my-great-appreciation/
really? wow… thanks a tonne
You truly inspire me Guneet !
keep writing !
seriously? and i took you as my inspiration. thats crazy but is good.
This is nice too..however..quitting those lame lines isn’t the solution..after all those lame lines have the potential to run miles in your heart..:)
you are right
Thanks