Sweet memories, Sweeter dreams
When all turn to a sour cream
Don’t cry over it, Don’t panic
Everything is passing by, It’s tragic
Close friends, Closer dear ones
When take back steps at once
Don’t get obsessed, Don’t suppress
Everything is passing by, I’m bit depressed
Long roads, Longer shadows
When seem to fade off like snows
Don’t ever care, Don’t get carried by strides
Everything is passing by, Taking another side
Unfelt love, Unfelt care
When is unconsidered, Never err
Don’t long for it, Don’t crave for it
Everything is passing by, Please Don’t Quit
Fading away lives, Fading away life
When makes you weaken as expected it’s rife
Don’t bear the pain, Don’t lose your will
Everything is passing by, if not, then one day it will
yes everything will going through…. just keep going…
hmm..
anyways thanks for the comment
Earlier your writings had more pain but these days they emit faith and strength……Keep spreading hope
thanks you .. i write what i feel like.. simple!
“Close friends, Closer dear ones
When take back steps at once
Don’t get obsessed, Don’t suppress
Everything is passing by, I’m bit depressed”
This really caught my eye.
Well written and executed !
well.. u inspire me girl.. how will i not write well!?!!
catchy riddles and poetic rhymes
will always flow and keep as life passes by
one will have a belly laugh,one may sniffle and cry
as you said, “everything is passing by”
such is the way of the moment in this time
What a great insight…I like it!
a silver tongue poet you are!
with the flair of a Bard…!
I will enjoy wandering through your thoughts
as they come into being, floating as whispers on the wind!
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BlessedBe
LadyBlueRose
thank you so much for the appreciation.
but presently I’m standing on the shores of life where no one wants to be..!!
you would be who is standing there also…wandering if they should leap…its the choice of the leap…leap of faith or just dropping off ..it is always choice, even no choice is a choice…
the way you write with your heart, I am thinkin it will be faith ..in yourself..
Sorry, I shouldn’t be so preachy …
but …thats me… I say what I feel…
your writing is a gift….you should enjoy it more…
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LadyBlueRose
i really admire you.. and appreciate the attitude of speaking your heart. thanks a lot.